What goes around…

So one of my new friends has this concept of Microstories  on his blog.  The idea is to write a story in one or two sentences.  I failed to prune down to that level on my first attempt, but here is my first offering.


As Anandan Krishniah lay dying on his hospital bed on the 11th floor of Fairfax hospital, he wished that someone would turn off the rantings of the Montel Williams show that blared from the TV. The room lost focus. The nurse took his pulse for the last time. His eyes closed. He saw the \”light\”, but it appeared to be another room in the hospital. He realized at the last second it was the maternity ward. On the 11th floor his nurse heard his final gasp, \”oh shit, not again.\”

By Ben Posted in Life

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